Justice Avenue Archive

Episode 2 (Original)

October 2019

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Transcript

Lucas: Y'know that didn't happen, right?
Sym: What doya mean?
Lucas: That last episode. That's not what happened.
Lucas: I mean, you did cry… but—
Sym: SHHH! They don't need to know!
Lucas: If you say so.
Lucas: I'm heading out.
Sym: Kay!
Lucas: Hey LJ!
Lucas: Spare a lift?
Liam: Sure!
Liam: Where ya headed?
Lucas: Main building, please!
Lucas: Thanks!
Liam: Anytime!

Sym's notes

May 08 2024

This is the comic I’ve mentioned before (if you’re reading this in order :’D) that had Lucas calling bluff in “The First One”.
I REALLY liked this episode and always came back to it with the intention of finishing it (at least the latter half?), but I just never did! This would have given a bit more view into the boys separate from me. I think it’s adorable that Liam flew Lucas over to the Community Center (Then called ‘Main building’). I also reaaally tried to work with the scroll format. I think some parts looked nice! It also would have established Liam having wings early on without much effort (he’s half angel, where Lucas is half demon). Alas... maybe I’ll do a callback (LOL).
It's also funny since I once again assert to make sure you KNOW we're gonna be breaking the fourth wall all the time. Though I think I prefer light fourth wall breaks now, rather than overt ones just for the comedy factor. But this one isn't too severe, because in canon I'm writing the comic while life is happening around me (in all versions).

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